Caroline Fyffe is a full-time artist. By day she is a renown equine photographer whose work has graced the cover of many a magazine. By night she writes award-winning romances in a variety of categories. A two-time Golden Heart® finalist, she walked on stage when she won in short historical in 1999, just two years after she’d begun writing.
Caroline’s business takes her across the country, and her travels have taken her around the world. In her stories she takes her readers to various destinations and different time periods.
I got to know Caroline online. She left a comment for another of my guests and won the drawing that day. When she received her packet in the mail, she noticed the return address and asked about it. Turns out she graduated from the high school where my husband teaches. I learned we’re also chapter mates at the Sacramento Valley Rose chapter of Romance Writers of America®. We’d met briefly at RWA® Nationals when we sat together at the awards ceremony—in the first row right in front of the podium where the winners gave their speeches.
Read on to learn what an important part other writers play in Caroline’s life, her favorite way to brainstorm a story, and what she did to her hero’s beloved filly in one of her western historicals.
I invite you to leave a comment for Caroline. In honor of her, the drawing prizes for her visitors are horse-related. Look for more details at the bottom of this post.
•Caroline, will you begin by telling us what led you to write romances?
Thank you, Keli, for your gracious words. You build me up way too much—I’m really just a little ol’ photog, as-yet unpublished writer, and most importantly, a mom … .
But, let’s see—what led me to writing? First and foremost, I was an avid reader from a very early age. My mother was always after me to turn out the light, put down my beloved westerns by Zane Grey and Max Brand, the Kent Family Chronicles by John Jakes (Remember those? I think there were eight in the series), and such classics as Wuthering Heights, and go to sleep!! I was in high school when The Flame and The Flower by Kathleen E. Woodiwiss hit the bookshelves and I was instantly hooked on romance.
• I see that you’ve placed in several contests with a number of different manuscripts, including your Golden Heart win in 1999. When did you begin work on your first romance manuscript, and how many have you completed?
I didn’t know a thing about writing fiction when I first put words to paper in 1997. I was a mother of two young boys, and during the quiet times of the day I was drawn to the computer. Having never even considered writing before, it was a surprise to me when I began my first story, Chasing Jessie.
It wasn’t long before I went to a bookstore and looked for information about writing a romance. Thought that might be a good idea! LOL. I found the number to RWA (I’d never even heard of Romance Writers of America) in the back of a book and called. Someone there asked me where I lived and directed me to a critique group in my town. That was the nicest thing she could have ever done. I wish I remembered her name because I’d like to thank her in person.
I called, and it just so happened that the group had an opening, and I was invited to have lunch with the members. Susan Crosby and Robin Burcell, two of the most well-respected, prolific authors in the business, turned out to be the founders. They took me under their wings and very, very patiently taught me that writing was more than telling a story. There were some rules one had to follow, like having one point of view character tell the story at a time. And a very troubling yet significant element called conflict, external AND internal. Without it, the reader had no reason to keep reading. Months flew by, and I looked forward to our weekly sessions, as only a writer can understand.
A critique group is like a living organism, always shifting, changing. One member left, but soon we were joined by Theresa Ragan, the exceptionally talented writer who blogged here recently and has finaled six times in the Golden Heart, and Susan Grant, who was working on her first book, Once A Pirate. It was fabulous!!!
Since then I have completed three manuscripts and am working on my fourth. My first two are western historicals, followed by a woman’s fiction story that takes my heroine to Austria for all kinds of adventure, which was super fun to write. My fourth is an inspirational western historical. LOL!! I’m all over the board!
•You’ve enjoyed being in the spotlight at RWA Nationals as the GH winner in the short historical category back in 1999 and again in 2007 when you returned as a finalist. Did winning the Golden Heart garner you more attention from agents and editors than being a finalist in long historical?
It’s very hard to know if winning was any more advantageous than finaling. I think they both open doors.

Caroline Fyffe with the angel figurine given her by the Sacramento Valley Rose chapter of RWA when she finaled in the Golden Heart in 2007. Use of photo generously granted by SVR.
•With so many contest finals and wins under your belt, including the prestigious Golden Heart, what advice would you have for those entering contests?
Pick the contests that have the final judges you want to get your work in front of. Contest entries add up fast. Be picky. Besides judges, I always look for contests with no synopsis. <ggg> They’re my Achilles’ heel!!
• I understand you’re part of a group of critique partners who’ve become quite close. What makes your group work so well? What suggestions would you have for those seeking a critique partner?
I don’t have a critique group per se that meets each week like my first one did. I do still work with Theresa Ragan, though. We email pages back and forth. Her positive attitude and intellect keep me on track and writing. We get together for an entire day when we’re preparing to start a new project and loosely brainstorm the whole book—very, very loosely that is. You’d be amazed how well it works. It’s nothing concrete, but if your muse runs dry, voila, instant ideas.
I also exchange pages with Kayla Westra, my roomie from the 2007 national conference and a fantastic writer. Upon meeting the first day at The Golden Network event, we instantly hit it off. We were both finalists in the same category, but neither one of us won. We celebrated anyway! Ha! Theresa and Kayla both offer something different, and the system, for me, is perfect.
•You run an incredibly successful equine photography business, having been voted photographer of the year by the Pacific Coast Quarter Horse Association. Your photos have been featured on the covers of Horse and Rider, California Horse Review and Appaloosa Journal, to name a few. As a writer of western historicals, does your love of horses lead you to work them into your stories?
Yes, absolutely! I always seem to have a horse somewhere in the plot. In my second story my hero, Luke McCutcheon, has a green broke filly he’s bringing along slowly. She’s real pretty and smart. While pushing a herd of cattle across a swollen river, Luke’s brother is washed away, and Luke has to ride to his rescue. In the process, Chiquita breaks her foreleg, and Luke has to put her down. It didn’t start out that way, but sometimes the story just writes itself . . . however, for me, that scene was heartbreaking.
•I see that, although your business is based in California, your photography takes you around the country as you serve as a photographer for horse shows in Oklahoma, Texas and beyond. I noticed, too, that you’ve been to Rome and Washington, D.C. in your travels. Do you have a favorite travel destination, and do the places you’ve visited work their way into your stories?
I’ve been very blessed to have traveled as much as I have and to such wonderful places. To pick one would be impossible. But I would say, yes, for me it’s so much easier to pull detail from somewhere I’ve been before or something I’ve experienced than to try and dream up all the minutiae that makes a scene come to life.
•You’ve been writing and pursuing publication for a number of years and are a wonderful example of persistence and perseverance. It can’t be easy, though, to be so close for so long. I’m sure that, like most of us, you’ve battled discouragement and doubts. How do you deal with the hills and valleys of a writer’s life?
I would be lying if I said I never got discouraged. It just goes with the business. Actually, I stopped writing for a number of years once, four to be exact. I got involved with a couple of different things, I didn’t have critique partners at the time to hound me, and that’s how it goes.
Cheryl Magoteaux, a journalistic writer I know from the horse shows, talked about critiquing together. The moment I started writing again (this was my romantic elements story), I became happier, and I knew then that I was where I was meant to be.
•What encouragement would you offer others on the road to publication?
Submit. Submit. Submit. You can be an excellent, page-turning writer, but if you never submit, who will ever know? When your beloved manuscript comes back with a rejection—and it will come back, I promise you—brush off the hurt and disappointment and send it out again, all the while writing another story.
And remember, too, that we are very blessed to be a part of this crazy business! We get to pour out our hearts everyday; connect with fun, intelligent women; let our imaginations run wild without consequence; travel to the ends of the earth in search of undying love; work in our pajamas; and if we’re in the exact place at the right moment, when all the stars line up just so after midnight on the third lunar eclipse of the century <ggg> (I’m joking, of course), if we’ve learned our craft well, cultivated our brand, networked with thousands of readers and writers AND been persistent, perhaps we’ll get to experience the overwhelming joy of seeing our cherished story alongside the works of those talented, wonderful, creative authors we’ve read and admired for years! Now I ask you … what could be better than that?!?
Thank you so much, Keli, for having me as a guest on your blog. This is my very first time, and I have to say it was really fun.
Before I sign off I have a question for my guests and would appreciate their feedback. Will readers object to the scene I mentioned before in The McCutcheons where Luke McCutcheon has the sad job of putting his filly down? Is it too true to life? I don’t want to offend anyone, and yet that is exactly what happened to horses that were ill fated enough to get badly injured when out on the trail. I would really appreciate any and all opinions.
Leave a Comment for Caroline
Caroline will drop by throughout the next three days to chat. She’d love to hear from you.
If you don’t see a comment form below, please use the link by the post title.
In honor of the fact that Caroline is an award-winning equine photographer, two of those leaving comments for her will each receive horse-themed items: two small calendars and a bookmark in a tiny tote bag.
I’ll hold the first drawing the evening of 9/22 and the second the evening of 9/24.
If you don’t wish to participate, say so in your comment, and your request will be honored.
Congratulations to Sherry Harm, winner of the first drawing, and to Cathy S., winner of the second.



September 21, 2008 at 10:17 pm
Caroline,
Welcome to Romance Writers on the Journey. It’s great to have you here. I hope you enjoy your visit. I know your guests will be glad to learn more about you, your life and your writing.
September 22, 2008 at 4:23 am
Caroline,
I’m surrounded by four-legged critters so hate to say this, but you’ll have to shoot the horse. (My sister is going to shoot ME for saying that, but what is, is.) Remember when they shot Ole Yeller? Talk about cry! But emotion is what we do, and it isn’t all rainbows and butterflies.
Hope to see you in DC. A reunion of the Bond Girls would be fun.
September 22, 2008 at 6:17 am
Good morning, Keli,
I’m happy and excited to be here. I’m not convinced I have anything new to offer readers. If nothing else I hope they will just be persistent and just keep plugging along. What do they say about Dr. Seuss?? Wasn’t he rejected something like 44 times? One of his quotes that I like best is “Think left and think right and think low and think high. Oh, the things you can think up if only you try!”
September 22, 2008 at 6:21 am
Wow, Pat—You’re an early riser—good morning!
That was a great movie! Thank you for reminding me about it. I don’t feel quite so heartless now! But, I understand where your sister is coming from. That’s why I ask the question. I know many don’t like to see or hear of anything that hurts animals in any way.
Thanks for stopping by—and so early. You get the Early Bird Award. I’ll be excited to visit with you in D.C. ((:^> That’s going to be a great conference. But then, they all are!!!
Hugs,
~Caroline
September 22, 2008 at 7:01 am
Caroline the story of your writer’s journey should be inspiring to all those on their own trail to publication. What would you say is the one major lesson you had to learn to make a story that pulls you out of the “slush” pile?
thanks!
September 22, 2008 at 7:02 am
Hi, Caroline!!
It’s great to “see” you, after only having “talked” to you online. I didn’t even know you were a 2x finalist and a winner of Golden Heart because you are TOO modest!
I always like to know when writers do their writing, so when do you do yours and for how long at a time? Early in the morning, after dinner, only on the weekends? Does it differ with each manuscript?
Can’t wait to actually meet you in Utah in 10 days!
September 22, 2008 at 7:02 am
Great blog, Caroline! And some great advice. Without a doubt, persistence is the key. It is simply a matter of having the right book in front of the right editor at the right time.
As for the horse, I must agree that you’re going to have to put it down. It’s gonna tug some heartstrings for sure, but it will show so much more about your character. Like any scene, if it’s gratuitous, the reader will know it, but if it’s germane to the plot…
September 22, 2008 at 7:03 am
Hi, Caroline, wonderful, inspirational post. I loved how you met your critique partners. I have my in-person group, but have valuable CPs I’ve met at conferences and on line. There’s something about this biz and connections, huh? Your equestrian photography business sounds fascinating; congratulations on having so many passions. It will keep you forever young. And as for your last question. I think in the horse business, unfortunately putting an animal down is a fact of life. I’m sure you make’s Luke’s response equally emotional to match the severity of the act. Remember Old Yeller? When the boy has to shoot his beloved dog? Man, I cried. But around the bend came the puppies. Writing is about feeling and it’s all in the presentation. Trust your gut and how you need to tell this story. As if you didn’t know
September 22, 2008 at 7:25 am
Hi Caroline! I’m so glad I came by…I had no idea you had done all this! My daughter would be enthralled with your photog job…she’s been horse crazy for years. Your advice is so spot on, and I can relate to a lot of your story, since I’ve got young kids and got going pretty much the same way (beginning with a trip to Booksamillion to get one of those Idiot’s Guide books on getting a romance written/published, which is how I heard about RWA).
Your Westerns sound great. And sadly, you probably do need to shoot the horse, even though it stinks. Part of what makes historicals so engrossing is the true-to-life details like that, even if they’re hard.
Great post, Caroline!
September 22, 2008 at 7:36 am
Stephie has told me about your writing and horse photography so it’s a pleasure to read about you.
I think having to put the filly down will make it a more true-to-life, yet poignant story. People who have and love their animals will be able to relate to having to choose such a fate. Of course, we’ve seen it in the movies, too.
I look forward to reading your books.
September 22, 2008 at 7:40 am
Caroline, I LOVE this interview you and Keli did together! Wow! So inspirational!
Caroline has always been filled with support and encouragement for everyone.
Sadly, you must put the horse down. Just reading that small paragraph about that scene gave me chills. The reader will feel what you feel as you write that scene…
Caroline has also taken some amazing author pictures. I can’t wait until I can hire her to take mine!! Thanks for sharing your amazing story of perseverance with us today!
September 22, 2008 at 8:25 am
Caroline, congratulations on your two Golden Heart finals. Amazing. As an American Title finalist, I can only agree that entering the right contest with the right judges is the way to go. But while I know how hard synopses are, and how much we writers don’t like them, I would still recommend entering contests that have them. Editors require synopses. And practice helps. And also a judge might be able to see if you have a hole in your story if you are looking for feedback. Just a thought.
I love that you write westerns. I love westerns. We need more westerns. As for the horse, I don’t know, honestly. Perhaps it would depend on how well the reader has got to know the particular horse during the story. An interesting problem.
Best wishes for success.
September 22, 2008 at 8:35 am
Hi Liese~
I like your play on words (own trail) I just wish I had thought of it myself. LOL!
I believe what they say about an opening line—it’s critical. You have all of a nano-second to catch and keep someone’s attention. I really don’t think it’s stressed enough. And, in my opinion, this may sound ridiculous to some) but the title carries about as much weight, if not more.
Thanks for stopping by!!
September 22, 2008 at 8:47 am
Stephie! Hi!
My best times are in the early morning. If I get up around 4:30 and my brain is fresh, it’s much easier. But, anytime the house is quiet is good also.
Is it only 10 days utill conference!?! Oh my gosh. I’ve got to get planning. It’s going to be a blast—especially the ride from the airport with Megan MeKeever from Pocket! (shiver, shiver)
September 22, 2008 at 9:00 am
Hi Robin,
Thanks for the flowers!! I remember the exact first time I read for you and Susan. Those were good times! You two were so nice.
Okay, I’m not feeling as bad as I was about having to let the filly die. Unfortunately, I gave her the name of my last horse, Chiquita. (Means little girl in Spanish) Maybe, I’ll switch that…..
Now, get back to work. I’m sure you’re on a deadline—You’re always on a dead line you lucky ducky.
Coffee sometime soon?
September 22, 2008 at 9:16 am
Caroline,
I am sad to say this, but you’ll have to shoot the horse. Your readers will agonize (just talking about such a thing gives me a knot in my stomach). Your hero will agonize. Such a level of sadness will make the story that much more realistic, and the joyful moments will shine even brighter. If the story comes to you in such a way that this turn of events FEELS unquestionable, go with it.
Your path sounds so familiar to me.
You are a lady of grace and humor, and undoubtedly soon to be a star. I’m so happy to know you, and I hope we get to meet in person at the next RWA Nstional!
Hugs,
Shelby
September 22, 2008 at 9:51 am
Hi Donnell~ a fellow 2007er….
Yes, there’s just something different, special, about critique partners. Through the years, and talking with lots of other writers, I’ve never seen any jealously displayed over someone else’s victories. It’s a sisterhood, I’d say. I guess it’s because we share the same elusive dream.
And, Luke does get another horse. A colt this time…but, just as fiery.
~Caroline
September 22, 2008 at 10:02 am
Morning Caroline. I loved getting to know you better in this interview. We’ve become friends at both our SVR meetings and with me teasing you about coming in one point behind you in several contests. If I have to lose, I can’t think of anyone else I would rather lose to.
Continued good luck with your writing – and please sell soon. I can’t wait to hold an autographed copy of one of your books.
September 22, 2008 at 10:29 am
Hi Kendra,
I’m glad you came by also! ((:^J
Girls always love horses…anything to do with them!!! Growing up with four older, horse-crazy sisters, it was difficult for me to get my hands on anything horsey. We lived in a small house—-with no real horse in sight making us get creative to fuel our love of them. So, by direction of my sister Jenny, we all made horsefolders. Jenny’s and Mary’s were fantastic—mine (I oh so wish I had it now) was just a jumble of pictures cut out of magizines and crambed into a book. Theirs where organized with headings and quotations, stallions and mares, show horses and ponies and such. Very beautiful. Somewhere along the line of moving, we were an airforce family, they were lost….such treasures!
~C
Another one for shooting—good!
September 22, 2008 at 10:47 am
Hi, Caroline!
How fun to be reminded of your beginnings in the business. I do know how hard you’ve worked (commas, commas, commas
. And I remember when they announced your name as the Golden Heart winner and I screamed–and I NEVER scream
. Awesome moment. I can’t wait to scream again when you get THE CALL!
Susan
September 22, 2008 at 10:56 am
Greetings Caroline! Thanks for sending me this link. I enjoyed reading about you and your journey to writing. You have inspired me to buckle down and get my attempts at writing fiction in a form I can submit…and submit…and submit.
I pray this is a begining to a long and fruitful communication between us and your fellow writers.
Marge
September 22, 2008 at 11:08 am
Judy, nice to meet you! Any friend of Stephie’s is a friend of mine. Has she let you read her book, The Masquerading Duke?? It’s awesome!!! She’s only let me take a peek at some of the horse scenes to see if (not being a horsewoman—she says that not me) they are okay.
~C
Another vote for yes. I’ve yet to get a no, don’t shoot!
September 22, 2008 at 11:22 am
Hi Theresa~~ ((;^>
My ever faithful, wonderful, darling and yet army-drill-sergeant critiquer and friend. Thanks for the call out on the author pictures—I think they would be really fun to get into. You already know you’re a no-charge!!! We argue about that all the time. I will be doing the happy dance with you when your call comes. And it won’t be long.
Does everyone know that Theresa just jumped out of an airplane not long ago?!? Yes!! Along with her husband and daughter. Joe’s first shoot didn’t open. Wait a minute—this sounds like a murder mystery plot. It’s true. He free fell for a very long time before his second shoot deployed. Makes me want to go skydiving…!
~C
September 22, 2008 at 11:35 am
Hi Michelle Ann~~
Thanks for the congrats. Congratulations to you on your American Title final!! You must be thrilled. Okay, I’ll take your words to heart. You are more than right. I know I have to practice writing synopsizes (is that the correct spelling?) But, I can still hate them, right?
I’m with you on liking Westerns. And wanting more of them. Let’s just hope the publishing houses like them, too. Actually the pendulum is swinging and they are coming back into fashion again. Yippee, for once I’m on the right end of a fad…..
Thanks for dropping by.
~C
September 22, 2008 at 12:16 pm
Aunt Caroline,
From one aspiring writer to an already successful (but still aspiring)writer, I just want to say that I am so proud of you! It was wonderful to read the biographical info and your advice. I just can’t wait to have an autographed copy of your first published work! It will happen because you, of all people, are a go-getter and a get’er done-er!
I love you so much!
Emily
September 22, 2008 at 12:52 pm
Hi Shelbs!
Thanks for dropping in.
Shelby is one of the six members of our WIP group. (Writers in Pajamas) ((:^>
Luke does agonize, but vacillate—never. I’m getting so much good advice on this. Thanks! I’m not worrying at all any more over the scene.
And, it’s a date for D.C.
Have a great day and keep writing!!
~C
September 22, 2008 at 1:05 pm
Marlene~~How is your arm? Are you feeling better? You are such a darling. I’ve enjoyed getting to know you so much. You always have a smile and a good word for everyone. I loved eating all those chocolate goodies after the awards ceremony this year. We ‘ll have to plan on doing the same next.
I’ll do my best at hurrying up with selling. But, I think it’s like giving birth—sometimes the pushing gets in the way. Slow and steady…..
September 22, 2008 at 1:26 pm
Caroline – great entry! I am so fortunate to have met you last year and I am thankful for our friendship! And your horse photos – amazing! You are talented in so many ways!
Love, Kayla
September 22, 2008 at 1:45 pm
Guten Tag, Susan~~hallo!
Commas! Did you have to bring that up? Poor Susan, she edited my first two manuscripts. I’m a grammatical nightmare (hey, I could change Chiquita’s name to that) and she never even complained.
You’ll be pleased to know I just finished a workbook called, Comma’s, Teaching students to use commas correctly, without boring them to tears, by Randy Larson. It was so easy — I’m finally understanding things a little better. I recommend it to everyone who struggles. It has big pictures to help remember the rules. I love it. But, I don’t follow comma rules in blogs so this is not a good test on what I’ve learned.
~Caroline
I remember you screaming in my ear! It was beautiful!!
September 22, 2008 at 1:54 pm
Caroline!
Now I’ll know who to watch for next week at the SLC airport! So glad you’re coming to our Heart of the West conference, although the other finalists in your categories will be better off not hearing that you are a GH winner and two time finalist! Let’s leave them some hope!
See you on Thursday, and it was nice to get to know you a bit with this blog.
Lesli, your chauffuer…chauffesse?
September 22, 2008 at 1:57 pm
Hello Marge! Great to have you here! I’m glad to have inspired you and that you will soon be submitting. It’s a very good word. You must join SRV (Sacramento Valley Rose) chapter of RWA. The meetings are not far at all from where you moved to. Third Saturday of each month. I haven’t been for awhile, but would love seeing you there and introducing you around.
Marge is my cousin!! We have been out of touch for years and are just now reuniting this last two. It’s really been nice. Be warned though—If you join and then don’t write there will be someone hounding you….in a loving way, of course.
Hugs,
~C
September 22, 2008 at 2:11 pm
Dearest Emily,
Thank you for your sweet comment. It made me cry. You are already such a wonderful writer and crusader. You are fearless when it comes to social justice! Amen!!
I have to brag on you for a minute. Emily is my beautiful, intelligent and sophisticated young niece. She lives in Kentucky, but for this whole year, her junior in college, she is studying in Dijon, France. (Where the mustard is from) She speaks French fluently and we are all so proud of her.
After those wonderful words to me I will HAVE to keep plugging along. I can’t let you down….
I love YOU so much!!
Auntie Caroline
September 22, 2008 at 2:27 pm
Kayla,
I feel the same about you. Our personalities meshed instantly. I was nervous at first, rooming with someone I didn’t know, but then you said you lived up by the Laura Ingalls Wilder Town, and had visited often and I knew you had to be a very special person. ((:^D And I was right.
~C
September 22, 2008 at 2:37 pm
Thanks Leslie,
I can’t wait for The Heart of the West. I’ve never been to Park City and am really looking forward to it. Stephie Smith is my roomie and we are in the same category. The way I see it we have double the chance to win!! We both want to do something outdoors the first day, hiking or riding the gondola up the ski mountain.
Thanks for picking us up.
See you soon!
~C
September 22, 2008 at 3:49 pm
Hi Caroline,
What a wonderful and interesting article. I,m amazed about how little I knew about your professional life. What a treat to learn how remarkable you really are!!!! I already knew you were beautiful, funny, cleaver, personable and such a thoughtful and caring person but to now know the other side is enlighting. Thank you for being my wonderful and loving sister.
September 22, 2008 at 3:54 pm
Caroline…
I already can’t wait to read the scene where Luke must put Chiquita down. I know it will be spot-on for reality and yet achingly tender, if your earlier Western is any clue. If I live to be 100, I’ll *never* forget how awe-struck I was to read that book. Even though I make my living in journalism, the thought of writing a novel overwhelms me completely. I don’t know how *anyone* does it, and I admire that ability so much.
And then here’s this awesome, imaginative, beautifully told story–from you, my sister! Who never even told us she was writing a book! (Yes, she’s that humble.) When it was nominated for the Golden Heart, you had to tell us. And then, voila–it wins! We were bursting with pride. I mean, we knew already you were an award-winning photographer, but an award-winning writer, too? We were (and are still, actually) blown away.
Your writing continues to get attention and win awards, and rightfully so. The ideas you come up with, and the true-to-life characters, and the story lines…those are the heart of a good novel (to the reader, especially), and you’re always dead on the money.
It’s true, it’s true…getting published is a numbers game. Good things come to those who wait (and wait and wait and wait and persist and wait some more). I think it’s also true that good things come to those tenderhearted souls who take time to help others along the way, as you do and always have. It has to count for something.
Ultimately, I have complete faith in your talent and your persistence, plus in the belief that the stars *will* eventually line up just so after midnight on the third lunar eclipse of the century (because there’s a little of that involved, too).
And when that happens, all the sisters will be shouting “dibs!” the way we used to when we claimed those magazine pictures for our horse albums. Only now we’ll be after that autographed copy of YOUR book.
I know I’ll be *so* proud, but then again I can’t imagine, really, how I can be prouder of you than I already am, after all you’ve accomplished. And I mean that with all my heart.
With much love now and always…Jenny
September 22, 2008 at 6:53 pm
Hi Caroline!
Both you and Theresa are such inspirations when it comes to perseverance. And how wonderful that you ended up as CPs! Continued good thoughts on your writing and prayers for that long-awaited sale.
As for your question: Do. Not. Kill. The. Horse. Pleeeeease. These things kill me as a reader.
And the writer in me adds…think twice before killing an animal, especially on-scene. Many times these wonderful critters not only become firmly entrenched in our readers’ hearts, they also often serve a metaphorical purpose in our hero’s journey. And given the filly’s growth, you have me wondering if that’s the case in this story. So here’s a question back at ya: Does the horse NEED to die in order for Luke to achieve transformation by book’s end? If not, why put Luke and your readers through the distress? If so…well…I’ll just skip that part when I buy the book.
Joy & Peace!
Shelley
September 22, 2008 at 8:27 pm
Thanks to everyone who stopped by today to read Caroline’s interview and learn more about her writing journey.
One fact stood out as I read the many wonderful comments: Caroline is humble. I smiled as I read that because she asked me to remove some of the comments I made about her successes because they made her uncomfortable. I assured her that you, her visitors, wanted to know. Thanks for proving that to be true.
It’s time for the first drawing. My teenage daughter whipped out her trusty scientific calculator and randomly generated a number for the winner.
Congratulations to Sherry Harm. You’re the winner.
The rest of the names will stay in the running. I’ll conduct the second drawing from all those who commented on Wednesday evening, 9/24.
September 23, 2008 at 3:05 am
OMGosh, Caroline, the pictures on your website are gorgeous! No wonder you have won so many photography awards. And what a wonderful, inspiring post! Thank you!
Not that I won’t cry when I read it in print (and I know we will!), but shoot the horse. The scene sounds especially moving given that your hero is riding to save his brother. WTG!
BTW, the picture of you holding the angel from your chapter is beautiful. Congrats! That’s such a lovely tradition. Thanks for the wonderful post!
September 23, 2008 at 9:12 am
Oh my Gosh!! Thank you everybody for making my day and my first attempt at blogging so special!!! I had to go to bed at 7pm last night because I was so mentally drained from all your good suggestions, words of encouragement and LOVE! And because, I couldn’t sleep until 2am the night before because I was so very nervous. See what I mean about RWA?!? Everyone is fantastic!!
And of course, it goes without saying, I have the most special family in the world. We don’t always agree on everything (religion and politics is all….hehehe) but–we always love and support each other unconditionally, forever, without question….
Keli, you are a doll. I am so thankful we’ve become friends! Thank you for all the hard work in putting this together. I’m coming up to ol’ P’vill, my old stomping grounds, and taking you out. Is the Taco house still up there in your area. I had a friend (Val ) who set me up on a blind date there—actually a blind lunch—in about 1976/77?? Remember that Val?? Still haven’t paid you back for that one…!!!
Have a wonderful day all. Keep smiling. Keep writing!
~C
September 23, 2008 at 9:21 am
Hi Sher~~
Thanks for the beautiful words. You and Shelly (Sherry’s twin who is now in heaven) are a joy. The sun wouldn’t shine without you!
Have a wonderful day and I’m looking forward to our little jaunt to Kentucky coming up very soon!
Hugs,
~C
September 23, 2008 at 11:41 am
Gemütlich and Jenny…?
If not familiar with this German word and you look it up you’ll find the defination as pleasant, amiable, friendly. Or, when decribing a place, gemütlichkeit means comfortableness, cosiness, amiability.
For some reason or another, my sister Jenny and I have oft found ourselves descussing this word. I’ve wondered why, what the attraction is. We’re not German and neither of us speak it. (I try for fun) Perhaps, it’s because gemütlichkeit has such a nice feel in one’s mouth.
After reading your post, Jen, now I think I understand. It’s its etymology. From Middle High German gemüetlich, from gemüete, spirit, feelings, from Old High German gimuoti, from muot, mind, spirit, joy.
Thanks for being you!!
~C
September 23, 2008 at 2:38 pm
Hi Shelly,
How are you? Shelly is a fellow 2007 Golden Heart Finalist whom I met at the conference in Texas. I was just looking over the list of editing books on your web-page. You’ve read a lot!! I have one to recommend to you incase you haven’t seen it before. Revision & Self-Editing, by James Scott Bell. Some books just seem easier “to get,” and for me, this is one of them. The only one we have in common is, The Elements of Style, by Strunk and White, which is a doozy, small, but powerful!! LOL!!
I’ll take into serious consideration what you’ve suggested about Chicuita and Luke. Honestly, I’m not sure what the answer to your question is. From my gut I’d say, “no,” she doesn’t HAVE to die. But, I believe a rollercoster of emotions are what make a book powerful. Hmmm, I’ll have to think on this….
Have a great day!
~C
September 23, 2008 at 9:58 pm
Caroline and Keli, what a terrific interview!
I had the pleasure of roomming with Caroline and Theresa at RWA this year, and it was so much fun. And yay for WIPs!
Caroline, I vote (and you know I’m a horse lover) to shoot sweet Chiquita. And I think you may want to keep her name Chiquita while you write the scene. Your emotions and memories will become your hero’s, too, and I will root for that man FOREVER for feeling so deeply about his horse and ending her suffering as quickly and painlessly as he could, despite the emotional cost to himself. That’s a hero to me–doing what’s best for others and taking care of those he loves.
September 24, 2008 at 9:12 am
Good morning, Gail!
Thanks for stopping by yesterday, and for your compliments. Especially for believing that you’ll read, The McCutcheons, in print someday.
We writers have to keep each other going!! Your words are VERY appreciated.
The angel sits by my bedside, on my antique, older than dust, dresser. She is very sweet and is a wonderful SVR chapter tradition. It came after the long hiatus I took, so I was surprised when she was presented to me. Susan Crosby, darling that she is, sent me the photo….
Have a great day! Thanks again for your kind words!
~C
September 24, 2008 at 2:07 pm
Caroline,
Thanks for sharing some of your journey to publication. I hope you reach your destination. The part about the importance of a critique group is especially helpful. I’m having trouble finding a good arrangement, since I live in the “boonies.” But, you have encouraged me to keep trying. I also see that placing in contests are no guarantee of publication. It’s sad but true and the more we face reality the better we can face the challenges.
Good luck.
I grew up loving horses so I hope I win the drawing
Cathy
September 24, 2008 at 3:45 pm
Hi Caroline,
I am so excited for you!!! I just took a look at your website. It’s just Beautiful..But, what else would I expect from such a talented friend.
I’ve never responded to a Blog before but, I just had to congratulate you. I truly can’t wait to read these wonderful western romances you’ve created. What an accomplishment!!!!!!!!!!!!
Now, as far as Chiquita goes I have to say it sounds like you need to follow those great instincts of yours. I know being the horse lover I am it will be hard to read but, soooo moving and that’s what a good story is.. Go Girl and Good Luck!!!
Love You,
Janice
September 24, 2008 at 4:02 pm
Hi, Caroline! Thanks for the terrific interview–you’ve done so much to be proud of! As for putting the horse down, I haven’t had to face that in reality, but it seems to be a sad but real part of life. It may also give you a chance to reveal more about your characters through it. Best wishes with your writing!
September 24, 2008 at 7:56 pm
Howdy, Katey…
Yes! I’m so happy you see Luke the way I do. Selfless. A man of integrity and goodness. Real love is doing what is best for the beloved. Even if the beloved is a horse !!!
I had to laugh over how very sweetly you told me to put a bullet between Chiquita’s eyes. Wow, I can’t believe I just said that. Now I’ll really get some complaints. But, you all know what I meant, right?
Katey is a certified life coach! And, she has a Ph.D!! How cool is that? Be sure to check out all she has to offer at http://women-ink.com/
It’s a really inspirational site for women writers and she has tons of fabulous ideas.
We did have lots of fun rooming together. She is so very organized, and then, there’s me…! LOL
Have a good evening….
~C
September 24, 2008 at 8:28 pm
Thanks to everyone who has stopped by Romance Writers on the Journey to read Caroline’s interview and to those who’ve left comments for her.
It’s time for the second drawing, and the winner is Cathy S. Congratulations!
September 24, 2008 at 8:31 pm
Cathy,
I’m truly happy if I’ve prodded you on in seeking out a critique group or single partner. When one is accountable for a certain number of pages per week, one finds it a lot easier setting oneself into that chair and writing something. Something is better than nothing. Something can be edited. Three pages a day, and in a year you’ll have a book! And, the beauty of this electronically driven age is it doesn’t matter anymore where we live. If you are not part of a local chapter where you can ask around or put a notice in the newsletter, go online and join a specialty group. There are lots of them….check it out. Remember, it never hurts to ask. I’d love to hear what you find out.
Also, I couldn’t tell exactly by your post if you thought contests were a good thing, or not. Even though I’m not published, yet, I believe whole heartedly in the momentum contests give a writer. Even if I don’t final, there is feedback. I appreciate any and all suggestions on making my story more interesting, stronger. One judge highlighted a sentence from the third paragraph of my opening scene and said it would be a great opening line! I had never thought of that. I did a little re-writing and it made the visual much stronger. Of course, I don’t change everything. I take what I like, and discard the rest. We are our own final judges. (At least until we die)!
I hope this made some sense….
Good Luck in the drawing!
~C
September 24, 2008 at 8:33 pm
Cathy S. You Won!! Congratulations!! That was NOT rigged. I was just posting and hadn’t seen Keli’s post yet…!
Good job!!!!
~C
September 25, 2008 at 9:22 am
Hi Jan~~
Thanks for liking my web site. Means a lot to me. And, aren’t these blogs something!?! I’ve just started reading and responding to them myself, so I’m pretty much a newbie, too. Be careful though, because they can fast
become addicting!! .
How are Redmond, Cowboy and Layla??? (horses) I’ll never forgive you for laughing when Cowboy almost bucked me off (well, it felt like it) on the snow-covered pavement. I’m not as young as I used to be and I’ll admit I was scared. Took the fun right out of it. In my younger year he would’ve been regretting that spunky move—not now, though. I salute you for keeping your riding legs (like sea legs but different) strong!!
We’ll have to meet in Sutter Creek soon!
~C
September 25, 2008 at 11:00 am
Aww, shucks, Caroline.
Thank you. I know your book will be fantastic, and Luke’s scene absolutely engrossing and heart-wrenching. I bet you’ll be sporting a PAN ribbon very soon.
And Cathy S., congratulations for winning the drawing!
September 25, 2008 at 11:58 am
One can only dream……~~<3